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I felt this in my soul!

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Such a great read! Love your expressions👌

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Thank you!

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Jun 20Liked by Dan Ackerfeld

To the gritty ones

It was today's years old,

this very self same day,

when another self identifying retard ,

showed me an error in my way,

Solid to liquid eh ?

Not a chemist in high school ?

Did I want a gritty mess ?

Was I joking, nae if not kidding,

And trying to play the fool ?

For all these years,

In all this time,

To innumerable forgotten mugs,

To the picking teeth,

To the Clearing lip,

And tonguing of the gums,

Was I really, truely, today years old,

And never knew, noticed it, or spoke ?

Had I been living inside my head ?

For all this time and never got the joke ?

But now I also brace for impact,

While pulling another's tale appart,

How am I not the greater fool,

to share this upstaging brain fart ?

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